Friday, 10 June 2016

Scarecrow

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“Hi who are you? You look very different to all of us and very ugly, not like us.”

“What?” said the weird looking thing.

“You look like our scarecrow in our garden. At night it goes somewhere.” Bam! All of a sudden our house exploded and I woke up.  Everything was normal.

Floating outside my  window was a weird looking thing. He admitted that he was our ugly scarecrow. “You know too much about me. Now you shall die.”

I quickly shut my curtains and ran away.   “I knew it. I can’t wait to tell everyone.” I whispered to myself.

“No. Please,” screamed the scarecrow from behind me.  “I will do anything.”

“I’ve got one thing for you to do. Go back to scaring crows you ugly thing.”

So the scarecrow hopped back to the garden and I kept its secret.  Forever.

By Ayden

13 comments:

  1. Hi Andy,

    I love the way you put a lot of detail in your piece of writing. Also I love the way you made the story a bit scarier, The funny part was when you said ugly thing. I would really like it if you would check my blog.

    By Samia : http://rangikura-sb-samia.blogspot.co.nz/


    Checked : Kapree and Sonia

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  2. Hi Ayden, I'm Javahn that was a cool story! It was spooky, but also funny how he said ugly thing. But the good thing I like about the story is that you made me feel like I was in the story. The picture gives me goosebumps everytime I look at it.


    Kind regards
    Javahn
    http://rangikura-sb-javahn.blogspot.co.nz/


    Kaleb

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  3. Scarecrow
    Hi Ayden, I’m Darnell and this is a cool story. It was spooky but funny.

    I like the way you said “Hi who are you look very different to all of us and very ugly, not like us”. Does the scarecrow have a name?

    I really liked your punctuation because you used speech marks, full stops and exclamation marks.

    Kind regards
    Darnell
    http://rangikura-sb-darnell.blogspot.co.nz/
    Seen by:Benjamin


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  4. Hi Ayden, I’m Benjamin. This piece of work makes me feel like my life flash before my eyes, the best part was how you said “No please screamed the scarecrow from behind me. I will do everything, that part made me feel scared.
    Kind regards
    From Benjamin.
    http://rangikura-sb-benjamin.blogspot.co.nz/ Seen by:Darnell

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  5. The scarecrow was really scary because it was talking to the ugly person. It gave me the goosebumps!.

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  6. Kia ora, My name is Izzy. I really liked your blog post. When I look at your post My favorite part is when you wrote this ” Bam! All of a sudden our house exploded and I woke up. Everything was normal. Also that’s good punctuation. That’s why I like you interesting post.

    http://rangikura-sb-izzy.blogspot.co.nz/

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  7. Hi Ayden,

    My name is Musharraf. I like your scarecrow, it looks really spooky. I also like the way you made the background white and grey. The other thing I liked was your story. Your story made me kinda creeped out because the bit where you said, I’m coming to get you.

    Yours sincerely:

    Musharraf

    http://rangikura-sb-musharraf.blogspot.co.nz/

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  8. Hi Ayden, my name is Malcolm. Thank you for sharing your information about your scarecrow it looks very spooky like a horror movie. My favourite part was when you said Floating outside my window was a weird looking thing. He admitted that he was our ugly scarecrow. “You know too much about me. Now you shall die.” I imagine someone saying that.

    By Malcolm

    http://rangikura-sb-malcolm.blogspot.co.nz/

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  9. Hi Ayden
    My name is Madi i think your story has a good structure it is a really awesome story to read and I forgot I’m from Tom Price Primary school what will happen to the main character and what is the main characters name
    Room15 TPPS WA

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  10. Hi Ayden, my name Ben and I'm from Rangikura School. I have read from your story and it was brilliant. I really like how you wrote this part that you said “screamed the scarecrow behind me” I don't really know if scarecrows scream.

    Kind regards from Ben
    http://rangikura-sb-bent.blogspot.co.nz/

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  11. Hi my name is Matatia and I am going to commnet on your cool blog post today. I like the way you put some punctuations in you story. I also love the tittle and the picture. I love the scarecrow because they are scary and cool. I’ve been reading your writing and thought to myself, that I was in the story and died, hahaha I’m joking but I really like to say it is awsome.
    Kind regards
    Matatia
    http://rangikura-sb-matatial.blogspot.co.nz/2016/03/matatia.html

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  12. Hi Ayden.

    My name is Mereana. That was a scary story but it was very funny. You have put a lot of detail in your piece of writing. My favourite part was when you said “you look very different to all of us and very ugly”. The good thing about your piece of writing is that you have used punctuation, full stops and capital letters.

    Kind regards
    Mereana.

    http://rangikura-sb-mereana.blogspot.co.nz/

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  13. awesome story Ayden. It was really interesting to hear that amazing detail in your story.

    Stefan, Bayfield school

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